If anything, I'd say this game tries to cram a novel's worth of plot and characterization into something the size of a short story, and the result is that bits are sticking out every which way.Of course, this style may have as many fans as it does detractors, and I've graded according to my own personal taste. There's something very life-like about the characters. All the mini-games have been neatly swept into a corner so I don't have to bother with them." Well, that is not true.
Edward Cresswell (The young master) The master of the house. The gardener (Still no name) A kind and 'big brother' type. And some other not-that-important supporting chara, like nurse...) GUI: (I'm still changing them) text box day box Updating backgrounds (still have no estimation, because the date places will be so much. Imo, I would make the red a little bit less saturated, because it's a haunted house sorta game. There seems to be some space on the right side of the textbox - perhaps you could work the menu buttons into the right border?
You do need the gifts in order to get the best ending, but in order to reach any kind of ending with the characters at all, you have to build up the relationship enough to be able to choose them.
You can't just spam one interaction until the game ends.
Suddenly an old man came and give her a sheet of paper. The old man told her to go to the address, since the young master there is in need of a replacement maid for 30 days. In there lives an arrogant young master, a clumsy butler, a kind but cold gardener, and the old man! Yeah, this is the dating sim flash game you'll find anywhere in the internet, like pacthesis and nummyz. ^^ I'm not a writer, but fortunately I've found 2 writers to help me!! Sometimes seems stupid, but actually he's good at valuing person. And finally, the rest is just the mansions and a little bit of places ahhh... Any suggestion and idea for the design, or anything? I'm pretty bad at these kinda things, so dunno how2fix.
Moreover, in the first day she realize that they are all vampires! XD (dancing around) Cast of characters: Arisa (heroine) A pure hearted maiden who just lost her parents due to an accident. The maid (Still no name) She's the one whose job we take over for 30 days. Humphrey Cresswell (the old man) Father-like figure Arisa's parents Not lucky with money, but have big hearts. Editing background (you can take these backgrounds. Thanks before ^^There are a few spots on the textbox/day change that show usage of textures. Maybe add a sort of border around the rounded rectangles to kinda ease in the pushed in textbox/background? :v Though you should try to see if there are any other fonts that may fit the VN better. It might be a bit large, but I think the size of the side portrait and namebox is more noticeable - they're a bit too large and high for my tastes. Maybe you could try shrinking the border and moving the side portrait down a little?